Dialog ; suggestions

Zarya  : “Hey, Raissa. I heard that there are a lot of good movies this week, why don’t we go to the cinema today?”
Raissa : “ Really? Well, it’s such a good idea. Let’s go to watch horror movie,then.”
Zarya  : “Okay I agres, but we have to buy the tickets first, don’t we?”
Raissa :” Yes, of course ! Can I buy some popcorns too? In case we are hungry while watching the movie.”
Zarya  : “ Well, I’ll buy the tickets then, and I want the caramel one okay?”
Raissa : “ Deal. We’ll meet here with 2 movie tickets and 2 caramel popcorns on our hands okay?”
Zarya  : “ Okay, see you !”

Short Movie

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Hi ! My name is Raissa Kayana Putri from X Science 7, 3 Senior High School. The video above is my and my friends (our) short movie. Hope you like the video ! xx

Raissa- Announcement Text

Elements of the Announcement	Found/Not Found	Details
Opening	Found	“Tea with Mrs. Potts”
Contents	Found	Information of the event including time/date/place specification.
Closing	Found	Contact information

Elements of the Announcement	Found/Not Found	Details
Opening	Found	Hello Georgetown
Contents	Found	Information of the shop, including the temporary closing of their store, information about the opening of the store is in April 2013, and their website address.
Closing	Found	Website adress

Elements of the Announcement	Found/Not Found	Details
Opening	Found	Announcement about an outgrew old store
Contents	Found	Information about the new address, it is in Jl. Melati Utara No. 14, and name of the new store.
Closing	Found	Contact number

Elements of the Announcement	Found/Not Found	Details
Opening	Not Found	There is no opening in the announcement
Contents	Found	Informed the readers that they open branches in several big cities from first of January 2018.
Closing	Not Found	There is no closing sentence from the text

Elements of the Announcement	Found/Not Found	Details
Opening	Found	Call For Proposals
Contents	Found	The announcement tells the readers that in the first paragraph there is some general information about H5N1 Avian Influenza in Indonesia, what the dangerous of the virus for humans, and numbers of affected and death victims. In the second paragraph, there is some request from WHO, including proposal that will then be evaluated, some information about the awards and the research area.
Closing	Found	There is detailed information of call for proposal, at WHO Indonesia Country Office Website.

NO	TEXT	TRUE/FALSE
1	TEXT A	TRUE
2	TEXT B	TRUE
3	TEXT C	FALSE
4	TEXT D	FALSE
5	TEXT E	FALSE

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The Food Of Hell From Indonesia

Famous as one of the best tropical countries, Indonesia provides tons of uniqueness and excitement. Its nature, culture, and art always bring millions of tourist each year. However, this time we are going to talk about one thing, Indonesia’s cuisine, in particular Sambal.

 It is made from a mixture of a variety of chili peppers with secondary ingredients such as shrimp pasta, fish sauce, garlic, ginger, shallot, scallion, palm sugar, lime juice, and rice vinegar or other vinegars. Sambal is an Indonesianloan-word of Javanese origin (sambel). It is native to the cuisines of Indonesia, Malaysia, Sri Lanka, Brunei and Singapore. It has also spread through overseas Indonesian populations to the Netherlands and Suriname.

Sambal or sambel is infamous among tourist as the food of hell for its undeniable ability to make the consumer produces tears and sweat when eating. Produced using chili as its main ingredient, sambal is indeed taste extremely spicy.

Sambal is made by grinding ‘cabai’ or chili, along with several complements such as onion, cherry,  tomato, ‘terasi’, sugar, and salt. The ingredients are grinded using traditional tool made usually from wood or plastic. The texture is smooth with a vibrant color of green and red, depending on which chili you use.

Infamous among tourists for its spiciness, many tourists avoid it. However, some of them are challenged and try to eat it. Those who dare to try usually will get stomach ache or turn very red and sweaty in the face. Though super spicy, locals eat it in almost daily basis as their main meal.

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1. Alda Gracia Heptana (3)

2. Aulia Mutiara (7)

3. Raissa Kayana (25)

Vlog - EDU PASSION

Vlog - EDU PASSION

X SCIENCE 7

1. Aulia Mutiara

2. Hana F

3. Putri Kholy

4. Raissa Kayana Putri

5. Zarya Sophia

The Ugly Duckling : Narrative Text

       THE UGLY DUCKLING

       One upon time, a mother duck sat on her eggs. She felt tired of sitting on them. She just wished the eggs would break out. Several days later, she got her wish. The eggs cracked and some cute little ducklings appeared. “Peep, peep” the little ducklings cried. “Quack, quack” their mother greeted in return.However the largest egg had not cracked. The mother duck sat on it for several days. Finally, it cracked and a huge ugly duckling waddled out. The mother duck looked at him in surprise. He was so big and very gray. He didn’t look like the others at all. He was like a turkey.

      When the mother duck brought the children to the pond for their first swimming lesson. The huge grey duckling splashed and paddled about just as nicely as the other ducklings did. “That is not a turkey chick. He is my very own son and quite handsome” the mother said proudly. However, the other animals didn’t agree. They hissed and made fun of him day by day. Even his own sisters and brothers were very unkind. “You are very ugly” they quacked. The little poor duckling was very unhappy. “I wish I looked like them” he thought to himself. One day, the ugly duckling run away and hid in the bushes. The sad duckling lived alone through the cold and snow winter.

       Finally the spring flowers began to bloom. While he was swimming in the pond, he saw three large white swans swimming toward him. “Oh, dear. these beautiful birds will laugh and peck me too” he said to himself. But the swans did not attack him. Instead, they swam around him and stroked him with their bills. As the ugly duckling bent his neck to speak to them, he saw his reflection in the water. He could not believe his eyes. “I am not an ugly duckling but a beautiful swam” he exclaimed.

       He was very happy. From that day on, he swam and played with his new friends and was happier than he had never been.

General Structure :

1. Orientation: It introduces the participants which involve in the story of the Ugly Duckling. They are duck mother, Ugly duckling, duckling’s sister, and the swan.
2. Complication : It brings the rising conflict. In a long story, the complication should be minors and a major. In this story of ugly duckling, the major complication is that the new born duck is different form other little ducks. The difference makes him get bad treatment from others animals. As results, he is sad, unhappy and finally runs away.
3. Resolution : It comes to a solution for the complication. In narrative texts, a resolution can be happy ending or sad ending. In this story of the Ugly duckling, the resolution is happy one. He gets new friends who do not treat him badly.

English Project - Singapore

                     


     

So, me and my classmate, Alicia Elena, was made this video few months ago We were given this project by our lovely English teacher, Mrs. Wiwin. This video is made for persuade and invite the viewer (subscriber) to come and visit Singapore, especially Marina Bay Sands. The advance information is in the video. Hope you enjoy the video!

My Student Leadership Basic Training Experience

Raissa's Student Leadership Basic Training

         I have my second student leadership basic training at my high school. Before that I have done this leadership basic training at my junior high school, 5 Junior High School. The first leadership basic training that I have done before took place at 5 Junior High School Bandung. And now, as the new student at 3 Senior High School me and all of the new student must attend the Student Leadership Basic Training at Lapangan Pussenif. This event is for free, we don't need to pay for anything. We are guided by soldiers in Pussenif, our teachers, and also our seniors. 

         In the first day, we were lined up in Pussenif Field ( Lapangan Pussenif) and had an opening  ceremony there. It was a good day to had a ceremony. After we had a ceremony we were lined up again to move to the hall or auditorium in there. At the hall, we had an opening speech by our principal. Followed by welcomed from the chief executive. After that we were lined up again to walk in to our barracks. We moved neatly and swiftly to our barracks. We arrived at our barracks and put our bags and things immediately. Then, we were lined up again and moved back to the hall. We had so much material from the presenter that did a presentation to us. After the presentation we had a lunch. That lunch season was the most complicated lunch that I and probably my friends have ever had. Because we had to eat with our back straight and banana above our heads. And also we had to sing out loud before we had the meal. We said that the most complicated lunch that we have ever had because maybe we never eat properly and we were starving enough to sing at that time, though. After we sang and had our meal we finally ate. We ate with banana above our heads and back straight. After we ate, we were lined up again immediately and got prepared for pray. We ran to the Pussenif Field immediately and lined up and walked to the mosque for prayed. After we prayed we went to the hall again and got new materials from the presentations. We were almost threw up at the moment because we ran immediately right after we ate. But we still had to focus on the presentation. After the presentation, we were lined up again by our seniors to go back to our barracks. We prayed and we slept. I couldn't slept at that time because I were tired. Suddenly about at 12 am a siren rang out loud and I was shocked, so do my friends. And we were just remembered that if there were a siren rang we have to change our clothes and lined up n front of the barracks building immediately. We were in rushed at that time. We ran with sleepy head at that time and lined up. Some of my friends were still wore their pajamas, and the soldier told us that someone who still not wore the properly clothes would had a punishment and the punishment was exercised at the field. Imagine, we had to exercised at 12 am !? It was so freezing but we still to obey the rules.

In the second day, we woke up at 3 am and prepared to prayed. We were lined up by our seniors and to the mosque to had dhuha before shubuh prayer. We were freezing along the road when walked to the mosque. When we arrived  at the mosque we had wudhu (ablution) right after. Continued with dhuha prayer and religion speech. I were so sleepy when I did dhuha prayer. We listened the speech and sometime me and my friends suddenly fell asleep at a second. The speech was about 1 hour. And when the speech over, we continued to took an ablution (wudhu) again for shubuh prayer. After we prayed, we went to our barracks again and got ready to took a bath. After that we changed our clothes into our tracksuits uniform. Then we were lined up again with the soldiers and went to the field to warmed up. At 1pm we prepared to go to Taman Makam Pahlawan. We went there by our foot and it took about 1 or 2 hours to got there. It was a fun and tired moment at the same time. When we arrived there we made a circle around the parking lot. Continued with prayed. At 6 pm we did magrib prayer first and went to our line and we had to made our faced black. That was for hide our identity when we played the games at the Taman Makam Pahlawan or we called the games "jurit malam." After that we were given a paper that had a secret text. We should remembered the text to entered the place where the games were. We couldn't told our enemy in there. The game was so fun and creepy at the same time because 3 of the players had to walked by the grave. I can't tell much about this because that was a long story. But you just need to know that the "jurit malam" was so amazing and memoriable.

In the third day, which is the last day of this student leadership basic training we watched G30SP movie before we went home. After that at 11 pm we had a closing ceremony and also our last ceremony in this student leadership basic training. After the ceremony me and my friends took a photo with the soldiers. After that we picked up by our parents and went home. This was a memorable thing to remember and amazing student leadership basic training too.